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outline and charicter lists

   Outline of my crime     drama

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At the beginning of our film terrorists are threating to blow up schools up and down the country but detective inspector Blake Delmar is on the case.  He finds no clues and need to team up with rookie team sergeant Gabriel Webb and sergeant Thomas Hazelwood. Now they feel one person short and must find ace code cracker Shawn Hartley to help in the case. the two terrirists show themselves as tate winters and anna williams ...

A first school is targeted ad blown up… one body is found and various other body parts scatter around the burnt rubble filled ground. Mason drake is put into hospital by saving P.C  Vincent  Delanie from the explosion.  Who then swears to get revenge … he dies in the next scene.

near the end the main head terrorist Colton Mordicai  a full on battle breaks out and Colton falls to the floor and is swiflty taken to hospital.  The terrorists are beaten and the fight is one by the team police old and new.

New charicter list:

Tom Willis: Sargent Thomas Hazelwood

Jamie Gulliver :Commissioner Mason Drake

Lee Wood: Joshua Dawson

Kara-Lea Foster :Sargent Gabriel Webb

jobs for our group

Jamie Gulliver

- Director

Kara-Lea Foster

- Props

Brooke Marquer

- Camera Man

Jozie Peaty

- Sound and Lighting

Crime Drama Opening Credits

Name of Show	Conventions	Music	Other Information – Relationships?  Style? UK or USA?
The Professionals (1977 – 1983)	Car smashing though window - action. Running-action. Main actors introduced. Monuments, abandoned locations. The muscles  character	Funky, fast-action packed. Upbeat	Older guy in middle= boss All lead male characters. Gritty realism
Cagney And Lacey (1981-1988)	Guns, police station, cars undercover cops. Badges, crime scene, arrest. Main characters introduced, the supporting actors.	Jazzy upbeat blues Saxophone,	Friends, brunette married, blonde likes shopping are single. Grumpy boss, sending back to work, end of day blonde ready to go out brunette ready to go home
The Bill (1984-2010)	Cars, sirens, police uniform, offices, on the street, near the lock up. Communications room.	Catchy tune, repetitive- the show may be repetitive,	Girls and boys included, group effort, set in the u.k. no main characters. Ran for 26 yrs.
NYC 22 (2012 - Present)	Gangs, graffiti , main character as big As building= powerful, part of new York. Urban scene.= just the city (like a character)	Rap, gang type music= reflects the city.	Team effort. Multi-racial/ cultural team. No relationships.

Crime drama

In my group:
Jozie peaty
Jamie gulliver
Brooke marquer

Our idea

Our idea is that terrorists blow up schools and detective Kebby has to put a stop to their threats... until they finally make their move and a school is blown up and various body parts scatter the place where the school was blown up ... will the detective crack the case and save countless school children's live ?Wait an see... 

Our characters/ actors

William Kebby- Detective #2?
Ben Kebby       -Detective #1?
Tom Willis       - Sargent#1?
Jozie Peaty       - PC#1
Brooke Marquer-PC#2
Kara-lea foster -Sargent#2
Sam hopper   - PC#3?


Group name

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crime ideas

12 stages of film

crime conventions

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In the first episode of the crime drama castle there are murders taking place which resemble a range of books written by a semi-obnoctious man named castle. Castle teams up with a no nonsance detective as this strange pair put the pices of the puzzle together the mystry gets weirder and weirder by the second. As they catch who they think is the real murderer then in a surprise and alarming twist in this already odd crime they have the wrong man ... but they need more proof to catch the money hungry killer.

crime conventions 

crime 

blood 

killer

mystery

love

 detective duo

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